The Friday Fictioneers is a friendly writing challenge hosted by Rochelle Wisoff-Fields. The task of the challenge is to write a story in 100 words or less. You can find all the Fictioneers’ stories when you click on the little frog. Reciprocation is the life of this challenge!

Lost in Translation
The scenery is gorgeous. Large waterfalls pound the rocks with a deafening roar. The ground vibrates.
“Wake up commander, trouble!”
I stare at the pilot who’s shaking my arm.
“Passengers?” I croak.
“All good.”
“And that noise?”
“Check the screen.”
In front of us are… spaceships? They emit rays that create something like a barrier. That, and the sound. We’re headed straight for it.
“What the…? Fire the brake engines!”
I’m terrified. And angry at the robo-scouts who didn’t detect this. And maybe, deep down, I’m delighted that extraterrestrial life does exist after all.
But how do we survive this?
(100 words)

Perhaps one way to survive it is to realize that extraterrestrial life does not exist.
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Thank you.
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Never a dull moment. Well done.
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Indeed. Thank you.
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you’re welcome.
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Could be the start of something wonderful…. or not.
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Exactly. 😀 Thank you.
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🙂
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It’d be worth it just to know we’re not alone
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This! Thank you.
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I like the dreaming of home take on the prompt. Perhaps we should be thankful for what we have here rather than what might be out there!
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I want both. 🙂 Thank you Iain.
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I’m torn as to whether this is going to be a friendly encounter or a terrifying one – the barrier sort of makes me think the latter, but I would love to read more and find out!!
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Thank you! That’s the question if there is no common culture and language, isn’t it? 🙂
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With water being available at least they will have a head start in survival. Good Luck A Sc-Fi that takes us back to gazing into the night and shouting-‘Please come and save me.’
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Thank you! We do need a little saving, we don’t seem willing to do it ourselves.
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Another story that gave me much to think about. Well done, Gah!
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I’m glad it did! Thank you. 🙂
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His reactions and thoughts are bouncing all over the place – just as they would with an encounter like this. You’ve portrayed him very convincingly, especially his final thought. I hope he survives to spread the news.
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Ah, that’s exactly what I wanted. Thank you so much Margaret.
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Now that really is what you call mixed emotions. Nicely done.
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I’m glad it worked for you, that’s what I wanted. Thank you.
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I’m with Sandra. Talk about mixed emotions. I would be incredible to find out we are indeed not the only ones yet what are the intentions of the others. Great suspense. I want more!!
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Thank you! I want more, too, LOL. Where are they?
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I really hope the aliens come in peace. Wouldn’t it be nice if the barrier was to ensure we couldn’t leave our planet until we’d sorted out how to avoid trashing everything we touch?
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That’s a great idea. I meant them to meet somwhere in space, but your version works very well, too.
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In this vast universe we are not alone.
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I think so, too. Thank you Vartika.
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What a cliffhanger! Nice one.
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I’m glad you liked. 🙂 Thank you.
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Oh no!
I love a good scifi. You had me hooked from the first line. I wanted to read more!
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Thank you! I’m glad you liked it oh mistress of the scifi minific. 🙂
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Dear Gabi,
Despite the danger, there would be some satisfaction in knowing you were right. 😉 Good one.
Shalom,
Rochelle
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Indeed, I think so too. But survival would be a bonus. Thank you Rochelle.
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Gabi, I like this setup to a larger story. Good take on the photo prompt.
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Thank you! How would we communicate if we can’t even communicate among ourselves and with other intelligent earthlings is a question I often ask myself. I can’t even properly communicate with my dog…
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You’re welcome.
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